Remediation!!! and a techinical journey

The effort in making a web text is long and tedious, this I knew because when I was in high school I had to make a web page for my final project. No hints were given I was just given basic steps and had to figure out all the coding myself, this took me a long time because not only did I have to write my text, I had to put in all the coding to change the font, the color and size. the page to me forever because my goal was to put all types of format into the paper (i.e. links, video, pictures, slide show) I didn't mind it at first but some of the codes were long and the placement was a bit difficult to navigate.
Although I knew about making a web site I never tried making a good one. I never though of the designs and the finer aspects of it, the sounds of the links never crossed my mind.
I am not very savvy when making a design but this article has given me some things to think about.
Web design is also a decent paying job if you can get good enough, a problem is that you have to know the coding and be willing to sit and work hard for a long time. although web design might not be a career choice, my high school teacher was a computer tech and he would get the occasional odd job making a website for someone.

My technology journey is more oriented around musical tech because I am still learning all the different things out there, computers I kind of have down simply because I learned about them more than anything else in high school.

ReMEDIAtion.... (see what i did there)

Bringing up the thought of someone changing the rythym to thriller is not to hard to believe for me, if i go off the definition of remediation given to me i can say that people do this all the time and have for years so, yes i can see it. People dont just remidiate songs there is a program called photoshop that not only enable you to create something original it can also alter a photo comepletely,likeputting a guitar in the statue of liberties hand and making it look real, its not their original work but they have altered it and made it somewhat there own.
There is also remixing, which is done commonly among musicians, i could write a song on my guitar, then i could play the exacting in a lower pitch or i can give it an echo or maybe make the sound clean, its the same thing just different versions of it.
I think i could use these strategies by reffering to someones musical research to back a point, or i could summerize results from an old experiment about the effects of certain genres of music on memory. I could refer toa teachers lesson and how they saw a certain idea I could change the writing to make the idea clear and more tangible in the case that someone may not understand the musical  terms put into some of the work.

PROBLEMS!!!!!

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MY processes and a man named ... Zinsser

As for my writing process I believe that i have managed to make a steady progression, although my first draft seems to have had lack of any data what so ever, i believe that with the knowledge presented tome by the text i have read gives me some sort of information and i continue to write my paper, building my ideas, adding onto my thoughts. I have been and will continue to write in ernest what i have been so far, i will critisize and understand the current teaching method of the elementary teachers, but i believe that a time for change would be in the interest of anyone and i will write as to why.
My reasearch will rotate around the axis of what the effect of music has upon each person, and i will offer the ideals in which i present and back them with the axis, and i will also observe what todays current teaching is.
After reading this paper, i have seen a new point of view, less is more he says, it makes so much more he says; although my problem is that if i were to follow this approach instead of my usual i believe that all those years of improving my diction in the hopes of making my matter speech more eloquent would be a waste. I believe that if we restricted our speech to the standards written in ths paper would not be benificial but instead make writing a a tad more difficult. I personaly was always told that i am not making the way i talk better, but making the manner in which i speak more eloquent.

Reading The Times... Beliefs and such

The thought that we have gained our own reasoning for the sake of only being right, i can not agree with this. I am not being stubborn, it is an interesting notion, i just think that we developed our reasoning due to the accumulation of knowledge of the race over the years. I don't think reasoning is to help us find better beliefs, better descisions yes but beliefs, no.
I think reasoning could have started back to survival, we learned to make desicions as well as think of ways to get food and water. At the start of our race, we were "Man the hunted" and I see the early people as first using their thoughts on survival, thinking of new tools to help us survive.
This thought of being arguementive, that wouldn't change righting at all, people write as such all the time. Myself personally I write what I see as right and wrong, I am the one who interperates it all, the problems and questions are let in the air (in this case the paper) I have to use my reasoning to first interperate and then cmmunicate what would appear right to me.
To relate myself, to the thought of this article, I can say that yes I did argue only to be right, as well as tell a lie, I find this entire article interesting, it is a different notion that we may hold true, as children, but as we mature we use are reasoning for the first belief

Shitty Drafts ... AND Replying to them!? OH MY!

Just looking at the header I can tell you right away that this paper is meant to be informal. I read the paper and the auther is telling us that it is okay to have a crappy first draft and to me that is what I need to hear at times, because I  am always thinking that I will be graded on small things, but in the end i finish the paper and then re read it and i find things that absolutely need to be corrected. Lammott tells us from her own experiences and people she knows that everyone (Almost everyone) does first drafts that are shitty, which could help students like me realize that it is okay to have bad drafts because even the better writers do the same thing.
Looking at the second paper, I can say that this writer is not using profanity because he wants to give the student something that will give them information, the first paper seem to have used profanity to help us relax and maybe without relizing it get us thinking soething along the lines of "Hey they cursed, maybe it would be okay if we did that as long as the ideas get put down." The second paper is trying to get to students looking at papers written like the first, trying to tell us how we could go at helping write the second more improved draft
Overall reading these papers I have gotten a better idea on how to help other students with their papers also The first paper helped me out cause I am always nervous about my first draft and i feel a bit better now.

ADS!!! .... and rhetorical... things

The idea of intangible value, I hear this as “How can we make these commercials more valuable without spending much more”

His idea of using models to help improve the train ride is adding value, well the mention would make me ride a train as well as many other men and that will make the company more money just off the tickets, and as he said instead your making money just buying the employment of models.

There are plenty of people who want the train ride to go faster, boredom? Late for something business related?

Although from personal experience from planes or the rare ten hour car drive I want the ride to go faster out of boredom, although if I had the said model that was mentioned for the train serving me food then yes maybe I would be perfectly content with the ride and willing to pay for the trip and wait for the end and so yes I believe intangible value can be there.

To think that ads can have an influence on someone’s buying decision is completely reasonable and makes sense; it wouldn’t be just once I heard (or said myself) “That commercial says it’s okay (Good, Preferred, Recommended etc.) There are people who don’t know if their shampoo is good, their toothpaste, cars all of these people will debate about but if someone sees that the person in the commercial is good looking and has great hair they want that, if they see a car speeding through a beautiful route as they talk about the handling they compare with the peaceful view than they want that peace and easy ride so that may push them towards a decision.

I wouldn’t say that I learned more from this video because I learned the power of ads through my philosophy classes or just the basic theme of commercials, although I did very much enjoy this video.